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Boe the Eskimo
There is a little Eskimo named Boe He loves to play on the ice and the snow One day as he played on the ice, it cracked Boe, in shock knew the odds against him were stacked. Along came a kindly turtle called Jack He said "I'll show the way, climb on my back" So Boe jumped on board and off the two zoomed What adventures they had as their friendship bloomed. Boe saw sea creatures he'd not seen before Marine plants aglow on the ocean floor They danced with dolphins who move gracefully Twisting and turning to sounds of the sea. Then they spied large sharks coming at full speed Both of them were awfully scared indeed Their two hearts beating alike frenzied drums Afraid of finishing up in sharks tums. Suddenly Boe awoke from a dream Ma and pa rushed in when they'd heard Boe scream Boe said from now he'd do as he was told When out playing on ice, he'd not be so bold.
10th April 2021 Nursery Rhyme 4 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/25/2021 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So very cute/fun. "Love It," also love you line, "Boe said from now he'd do as he was told." Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 4/25/2021 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Paula, have a blessed day too... Belle
Date: 4/18/2021 4:43:00 PM
dropping back with many congrats on your win Belle:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/25/2021 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs, Belle :-) xx
Date: 4/17/2021 12:33:00 PM
A delightful story, Belle! Congrats on your 1st place win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/25/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim... Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 10:44:00 PM
Lovely little story of Boe....Congrats on your win Belle...much love, take care :)
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Date: 4/17/2021 11:21:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed Boe’s story Carol. Love and hugs ~ Belle :-)
Date: 4/16/2021 4:03:00 PM
Well done Belle!! Congratulations!! An adventure, a moral, and a dream. Good combo. Big huggs and love!! Deb
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Date: 4/17/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comments Deborah, appreciated. Big hugs in return ~ Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 2:25:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations :) - Have a lovely weekend, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, have a wonderful weekend too ~ Hugs, Belle :-)
Date: 4/16/2021 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Belle, on your win in the contest. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 4/16/2021 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. Happiness and joy wished for you too... Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Belle! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/16/2021 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Eve, I used to sing nursery rhymes to my nieces and nephews when they were young, they loved them (I still sing them to myself.) I have enjoyed the challenge of your contests very much indeed... Hugs, Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 11:12:00 AM
Smashing tale, Belle. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 4/16/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thank you for that Terry, most appreciated... Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 3:29:00 AM
Big congratulations. Loved your tale. So Original.
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Date: 4/16/2021 4:37:00 AM
Many thanks Victor, so pleased you enjoyed reading Boe’s tale... Belle
Date: 4/16/2021 2:42:00 AM
Hi Belle, I'm just coming to give you a BIG congrats on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/16/2021 4:36:00 AM
Hi Alexis a BIG thank you, enjoy a wonderful day yourself ~ Belle :-)
Date: 4/15/2021 11:33:00 AM
Honored to have stopped here to read about an Unforgettable Eskimo. I like the AABB format but it never comes off forced. Your words flow naturally and adults of all ages will love your adventures. I place this treasure in the read ten times category. I only wish you would have rhymed the last line as you did to keep your scheme going as opposed to the slant rhyme. Still a beautiful story.. Goodnight Jack and Boe..See you in dreams
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Date: 4/15/2021 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Michael, I see what you mean and will work on what is wrong. It’s good to get constructive feedback such as this and I do appreciate it. Belle... (Ps - Now edited)
Date: 4/12/2021 8:02:00 PM
A great children's story with a moral to help teach Belle. This is wonderful! Best of luck in the contest. I found this rhyme to be charming and meaningful. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/12/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie, truly appreciated. Bless you ~ Belle
Date: 4/12/2021 7:22:00 PM
Your well woven tale is so interesting, fascinating and pleasing to the ear. Children love these qualities, Belle. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 4/12/2021 7:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for that Evelyn, and the good wishes also... Belle :-)
Date: 4/12/2021 2:19:00 PM
This is sweet Belle. I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :-) Belle
Date: 4/11/2021 3:00:00 PM
what a charming story Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan, most appreciated ~ Belle:-) xx
Date: 4/11/2021 11:13:00 AM
Always love your take on things .
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Date: 4/11/2021 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, very much ~ Belle
Date: 4/11/2021 3:34:00 AM
- You are very good at these nursery rhyme poems, Belle :) - Love it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann-Lise, greatly appreciated... Belle :-)
Date: 4/10/2021 8:14:00 PM
Poetry as good as this, Belle, should be published, so children today all over the world can enjoy it also.
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Date: 4/10/2021 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so very much Harry, what more could anyone ask, it’s encouraging to receive such delightful feedback... Belle
Date: 4/10/2021 7:46:00 PM
Hi Belle, You have penned such a good adventure. I enjoyed the tale of Boe and the turtle. This a good story for the little ones. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/10/2021 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, good to know you enjoyed the tale. Have a wonderful evening yourself :-) Belle
Date: 4/10/2021 7:08:00 PM
Lovely, Belle! I myself am enjoying the adventure story of Boe! Wonderful poem for Children, and adults too! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/10/2021 9:48:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed the read Malabika, thank you, most kind ~ Belle