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Body's All Over

There was a grave sight not far down the road Dynamite sticks atop a donkey's load -- The burro went under The noise was like thunder -- TNT caused the grave site to explode

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/18/2019 7:49:00 AM

Hahaha! Now you have me laughing out loud! Such a silly man you are but I love it!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2019 8:25:00 AM

One of the traits I love about you my friend!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/18/2019 12:07:00 PM

Now, I want to suggest that you are right. I'm silly, for sure. But I'm doggone serious about being silly! Thanks, Brenda! Smiles, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2019 5:17:00 PM

I read Chris's comment and I laughed; the limerick made me laugh too. I did not even know I was in a laughing mood.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2019 5:46:00 PM

At least you're ahead of me! I barely know what 'm laughing at half the time!! ~ Con fuse dus

Chris Green

Date: 12/17/2019 5:07:00 PM

Wow, sounds like there were pieces of ass all over the place. : ) This was fun my friend.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/17/2019 12:09:00 AM

G'day Gershon … I reckon the donkey was the one who put the dynamite on the cart as dynamite does have a tendency to explode - thanks Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2019 11:49:00 AM

Donkeys starts with 'D' and explode just as well as dynamite! Smiles, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2019 7:24:00 PM

Lol! Gershon, Poor donkey. But I must admit this was funny. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 7:39:00 PM

I heard that the donkey's gonna be ok. As for the graves,... Thanks, Alexis! :) gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/16/2019 7:00:00 PM

Poor Donkey...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 7:12:00 PM

Just a pawn in their game, guess. Glad it's just a poem... Thanks, Arturo. Cheers, Gershon

Na Na

Date: 12/16/2019 5:50:00 PM

very funny Gershon at 1st I thought your poem was called bombs all over :)~ now you gave me an idea for a new poem I shall call it Bull Manure be on the lookout for it

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 7:10:00 PM

Bull Manure, eh?! Sounds like you've got a fertile imagination, my friend. Thanks, Gershon