Body,Mind,And Soul

To nourish breaths and twirl away when island counts beachcomber years folder and pen will imprint scripts of journey’s tales sucked from my womb with drawings and poems handwritten. For private care, need I bring toiletries? oh , Mother Earth offers all herbal scents, except for undies... that’s a load full; just maybe, they’ll wrap me from the cold or guise them as hats for summer’s fare. Forget the playlist as necessity, the music of waves, seagulls and leaves is finer than orchestra or blues combined; a serenade of night chirps will invite the lull of twilight, the hop of morn. In between survival and lush of days, Rumi’s journal would embed new seedlings opening chakras with tender wildness for pauses while I lay on moon’s hammock, enshrined in a banquet for body, mind and soul. What Would You Take Contest, Shadow Hamilton 10.30.2013
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Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 9:50 AM
nette, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :):)
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:43 PM
congrats.. LINDA
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Congrats on your win! the wonder of the world penned throughout, brilliant indeed!! Blessings, Stacey
May Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 5:10 PM
a unique perspective on the theme.....congrats on a fine win
Liwayway Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Two Thumbs up for this brilliant piece. Very creative. Big big congratulations on your great win!! hurray!!! big hug from me!! (^______^) Bandila'y Iwagayway, Kay Nette na mahusay, Sa pagsusulat ng mga tula, Siya ay isang dakilang makata!!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations on your placement nette love, well done xx
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 6:11 PM
beautiful poem...your images are always so uniquely penned....congrats on your win :) hugs
Jones Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Enjoyed reading again nette...congratulations
Roberts Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Congrats Nette ....Seren
Arowolo Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Congrats dear friend, for this wonderful piece..Great write...
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 2:06 PM
super poem Nette congrats on placing 2nd
Chircop Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:31 PM
I love the imagery of the moon s hammock deat and I love Rumi too..Lovely post
Devnath  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 11:24 AM
Nice revolutionary image adorned with philosophical tastes. Excellent color of your magic pen inked in to this excellent poem. Enjoyed a lot, my friend. Loved always, bl
Tacito Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 10:59 AM
This was uplifting & very touching. You know how to truly value what matters in the end. What you can/can't take with you. Excellent.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 9:30 AM
I think this is the best one I have read so far! Outstanding work Nette.
Mehta Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 5:25 AM
You are very selective of the things that your passion needs, nette
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Nette, a beautifully written poem that lies in the shadows of Rumi's genius. Brilliant!
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 10:37 PM
I simply agree with Russell and jack and the lovely comments below...winner..your mind is beautiful as you are....
Ellison Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 7:24 PM
This should do it for you Nette... I haven't seen the other entries but this is a winner for certain! Hugs Jack xoxox
Sivey Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 5:03 PM
I would surely choose you for a winner if it was my contest to judge! I already do have you as a winner in my heart my friend, this is a tremendous poem! My favorite part of this poem has to be after I read it all the way through, "...while I lay on moon's hammock," this is perfect Nette! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 4:18 PM
beautifully drawn piece
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed perusing your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:56 PM
- Learn to listen, feel and see ..... - A poem that provides "food for the soul" .... afterwards wanted dessert. - Beautiful,Nette. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:51 PM
My chakras, all opened wide/ For the energy of your poem to pass through/ Captivating my heart and my mind/ Thus there is nothing else left for it to do! Excellent piece of poetry! Thank you!
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