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Body of a Water

Glimmer is her body of a water Deep crystal clear surrounded by overgrown trees and wild flowers Situated between two villages also known as the lovers pond Where every young lovers met and had their first kiss Her pure sweetness flows to the edges where little CherryAnn would love to bend and dip her little fingers to taste its sweet freshness She would dip her little feet and feel its coolness inviting her deeper She knew she was not allowed to go in any further like the older kids do - but she didn't know why She would love to mimic the older kids splashing and laughing in the center of the pond She can only play by the edges and giggle from there While mommy's eyes dwell on her She would run back yelling -Mommy mommy I dwunk the watta -Mommy mi feet wet Mommy's face would light up, her heart expand with sweet love for her little baby girl But one afternoon after mommy was done with her house chores and went to wake little CherryAnn from her nap only to find an empty room Mommy softly calling "my sweet pea" where are you Mommy was calling four to five times and still no giggling from her little CherryAnn Alarm sound went off in mommy's heart Mommy running around the house the back yard and the neighbors Yelling where is my little baby CherryAnn All the other kids were in school So she had no one to play with But... Her favorite Drink...The body of a water that's hidden by over grown trees and wild flowers she had her own playmate - but mommy wasn't with her Mommy was running as fast as her feet can carry her But mommy couldn't run faster But mommy was too late There in the center of her pond floating facedown mommy's little baby girl Lifting her out Shaking her Pumping her chest Blowing air into her mouth Calling her name ———— nothing Little baby CherryAnn breathless Mommy's heart stopped Mommy's world is never the same anymore... The pond is now covered with dirt. Akkina R Downing 12-13-16 This is a true story about my sister and her little baby girl CherryAnn Who was taken away at only 4years old and sweetest angel

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Date: 10/2/2017 10:13:00 AM
Nice work Akkina, especially I liked the beauty of language.
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:52:00 AM
Worth reading a second time. Some great comments.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2016 1:18:00 PM
Awe, Richard, you're sweet :) Many many thanks from heart
Date: 12/18/2016 12:24:00 AM
I can't begin to understand the weight of sorrow that must weight your sister down. Dear...may God help and comfort her as this is something that will live with her every day for the rest of her life. To lose a child...who can fathom that pain. May God embrace you all in his arms of love
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Eileen, it means a lot to me...
Date: 12/17/2016 7:14:00 AM
This is so tragic my condolences. You with an evident grief that seems to carry your words through and I hope that this poem has been a part of the healing process . Sometimes it's good to just let it out and you did that !
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Kyle, my sister needs all the prayes. Her smile is hallow, my whole being aches too much for her. I know my baby niece is our Angel now and giggling with God, that I am grateful for.
Date: 12/16/2016 8:54:00 AM
My deepest condolences---I am a strong person but I could never bare a burden of this weight, Thus I look to God and Pray for your sister---to find solace in those who love her
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/16/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Jerry, my heart aches for her everyday and I know only prayers will help ease her pain. Thank you for your kind words, means a lot to me.
Date: 12/14/2016 10:48:00 PM
Excellent write. Well expressed write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/15/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Ravi :)
Date: 12/14/2016 8:25:00 AM
- Deep heartbreaking poem, Akkina - A terrible event for your sister and your entire family ... deep missed and loved - A sweet angel, lost - R.I.P. CherryAnn <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/14/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/14/2016 12:15:00 AM
This is heartbreaking. A beautifully expressed sadness. I am so sorry for your family.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/14/2016 4:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Richard

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