Body of a Water

Glimmer is her body of a water 
Deep crystal clear surrounded by 
overgrown trees and wild flowers 
Situated between two villages  
also known as the lovers pond 
Where every young lovers met and 
had their first kiss
Her pure sweetness flows to the edges 
where little CherryAnn would love to bend 
and dip her little fingers to taste its sweet freshness 
She would dip her little feet and feel its 
coolness inviting her deeper
She knew she was not allowed to go 
in any further like the older kids do
- but she didn't know why 
She would love to mimic the older kids 
splashing and laughing in the center of the pond 
She can only play by the edges and giggle 
from there  
While mommy's eyes dwell on her
She would run back yelling
-Mommy mommy I dwunk the watta 
-Mommy mi feet wet
Mommy's face would light up, her heart 
expand with sweet love for her little baby girl 
But one afternoon after mommy was
done with her house chores and went 
to wake little CherryAnn from her nap 
only to find an empty room 
Mommy softly calling "my sweet pea" 
where are you
Mommy was calling four to five times 
and still no giggling from her little CherryAnn
Alarm sound went off in mommy's heart
Mommy running around the house
the back yard and the neighbors 
Yelling where is my little baby CherryAnn
All the other kids were in school 
So she had no one to play with 
But... Her favorite Drink...The body 
of a water that's hidden by over grown 
trees and wild flowers she had her own playmate 
- but mommy wasn't with her
Mommy was running as fast as her feet can carry her 
But mommy couldn't run faster
But mommy was too late
There in the center of her pond 
floating facedown mommy's little baby girl 
Lifting her out 
Shaking her 
Pumping her chest 
Blowing air into her mouth
Calling her name
———— nothing 
Little baby CherryAnn breathless 
Mommy's heart stopped 
Mommy's world is never the same anymore... The pond is now covered with dirt. 

         Akkina R Downing
             12-13-16


This is a true story about my sister and her little baby girl CherryAnn Who was taken away at only 4years old and sweetest angel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/2/2017 10:13:00 AM
Nice work Akkina, especially I liked the beauty of language.
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:52:00 AM
Worth reading a second time. Some great comments.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2016 1:18:00 PM
Awe, Richard, you're sweet :) Many many thanks from heart
Date: 12/18/2016 12:24:00 AM
I can't begin to understand the weight of sorrow that must weight your sister down. Dear...may God help and comfort her as this is something that will live with her every day for the rest of her life. To lose a child...who can fathom that pain. May God embrace you all in his arms of love
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Eileen, it means a lot to me...
Date: 12/17/2016 7:14:00 AM
This is so tragic my condolences. You with an evident grief that seems to carry your words through and I hope that this poem has been a part of the healing process . Sometimes it's good to just let it out and you did that !
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Kyle, my sister needs all the prayes. Her smile is hallow, my whole being aches too much for her. I know my baby niece is our Angel now and giggling with God, that I am grateful for.
Date: 12/16/2016 8:54:00 AM
My deepest condolences---I am a strong person but I could never bare a burden of this weight, Thus I look to God and Pray for your sister---to find solace in those who love her
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/16/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Jerry, my heart aches for her everyday and I know only prayers will help ease her pain. Thank you for your kind words, means a lot to me.
Date: 12/14/2016 10:48:00 PM
Excellent write. Well expressed write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/15/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Ravi :)
Date: 12/14/2016 8:25:00 AM
- Deep heartbreaking poem, Akkina - A terrible event for your sister and your entire family ... deep missed and loved - A sweet angel, lost - R.I.P. CherryAnn <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/14/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/14/2016 12:15:00 AM
This is heartbreaking. A beautifully expressed sadness. I am so sorry for your family.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/14/2016 4:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Richard
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