Body For Rent

Jack put his ol body out for rent
His wife got mad and did vent
Threw him out of the house
Now he lives with a mouse
In a 1940's pup tent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:58 AM
How funny,:) I got to do this with my husband since he doesn't have the mountains any more. a 7
Nunez Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:08 AM
lol! You're firing balls the whole day? Great one again, Tim! :) Kim
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Oh poor Jack : )
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:42 PM
The mouse will keep him company : )
Leiser Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Hilarious!! :)
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Thanks Laura...This is my reply to Jack...He has been firing fun limericks today
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:28 PM
lol Tim great banter between you and Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Jan...some nice clean fun...hugs Tim
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