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Body Enhancements

Body Enhancements Great Big Fat Juicy Donuts Rolling one by one to my plate!

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Joey Peters

Date: 10/14/2009 4:27:00 AM

Funny man

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 6:45:00 AM

The title of this piece drew me in, and the contents of the read me LOL, once they leave the plate and are down the hatch they will make certain places big and fat... haha... Great writing my friend. I thank you for sharing the read. God Bless, Always,Adell

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 2:16:00 PM

you are talking my language, funny:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2009 1:07:00 PM

Yes doughnuts will do that. Excellent choice of food. They give me heartburn for some reason. Love the title to draw one in. Keep writing. Sara

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 10/4/2009 12:26:00 AM

Yeah, brother!

John Freeman

Date: 10/3/2009 4:11:00 PM

Love this one Martin, the big ones covered with cocolate about an inch thick, yum, yum! Kinda makes you puch out in all the wrong places tho.Lol! Haaaaaaaaaaa! Sincerely Moses