Body and Soul

Born of pain and raised on discipline,
 molded by the boundaries of the body.
 Burned by the heat of passion,
 hammered by the blows of rejection,
 torn by the pull of jealousy.
 How can one hold together?

 In the heat of our body we smith our shame
 and we temper our soul.
 We put an edge on our joy and sharpen our pain.
 With the fire of the moment,
 feed by passion,
 our bodies forge our future,
 random fashion.

 Logic streams away, like so much steam
 and there are puddles of melted reason.
 in the bodies forge leaving nothing
 to cement the soul
 and contain the passion.
 So it flares again.

 Attracted to each other by physical laws
 beyond our control we interact
 in an imperfect chemistry.
 There is no relief from uncontrolled action
 and the always unpredictable reaction.

 But with patience and time the chemistry
 becomes more perfect and less volatile.
 You learn that passion can be contained and
 that your body is more than vessel
 that holds emotions and reactions.

Born of pain and raised on discipline,
molded by the boundaries of the body.
Burned by the heat of passion,
hammered by the blows of rejection,
torn by the pull of jealousy.
Cooled in time, reinforced with experience,
welded by will and fused by love,
we hold together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/11/2015 9:32:00 PM
James,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2015 11:16:00 AM
James, congratulations on an excellent well-written winning piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 1/8/2015 12:58:00 PM
What is so great about this poem is that even void of the chemistry theme it is still a great write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work. Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:41:00 AM
May congratulations on your placement James xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:06:00 PM
I loved the way you fused the elements into something so real and human !! Well done !! A well deserved win !
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:42:00 PM
Nice to see some science in the verse. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:24:00 PM
truly appealing, james... congrats on your high win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:24:00 PM
James, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:32:00 PM
Congrats on win-rajat
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:10:00 PM
I love your unique take on the theme many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations James on a merited win based on a most cleverly tackled theme. I am very much impressed...you have an excellent and powerful pen. Well done! // paul
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