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   November 6, 2023

Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars

Frailty and aging are flaws in bodies of mankind Viral afflictions are infectious and pose grave danger Death from new diseases instantly come to mind making us wary of shaking hands with a stranger Toxins float in the air and swim in waters we drink No longer is it just the elderly that succumb Reasons why the world faces chaos on the brink But with faith the spirit soars without feeling glum Health issues can make a soul see things more clearly When it's been awakened, I find my spirit soaring I'm aware of beauty around me, and not just merely with a glance, but I feel the wildling wind roaring I find myself wanting to take flight like eagles in the sky anticipating storm clouds to feel raindrops on my face I know everything I've been given, but no longer ask why for I've learned to accept gifts within a sweet embrace My body is flesh and bone; my spirit is a different entity One that will not abandon me nor let feebleness win It has the power to exist in me as a blissful identity, a fortress of strength, a paradigm I call my linchpin Despite infirmities plaguing me when each day is done, my enthusiasm for life is professed with sincere meaning I cannot wrap my ailing body inside a cocoon, finely spun, so, I give thanks to my spirit for its benevolent intervening.
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Baker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Excellent way to approach each new day, Lin. I like your entry for the contest, especially the next to last verse, about the spirit and its power to exist. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Lane Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Thank you so very much, Bill.
Cunningham Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Very thought provoking Lin and so true, although our bodies age with time our minds stay young. Tom
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, Tom. My mind fluctuates between ages 40 and 2. ;-)
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Very nice poem! My favorite line: Health issues can make a soul see things more clearly.
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, ~Aa.
Parker Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 11:40 AM
BodyMindWill…..Soul. Soaring after Creator King!
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Awestruck
Goldsmith Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:51 AM
A great write/picture. Love It... Age is just a number until you have pain. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:10 AM
I will be writing a bit later and thanks for your encouragement, Paula.
Greenhough Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:47 AM
I call this a perfect poem. it defines exactly how I also feel,not that I'm aging and fading, but that my person in itself is whole. Today will be good. Thank you for keeping me in touch with life.
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Hi Hilda and thanks for your positive thoughts. Sooooo much better than being pessimistic.
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:13 AM
This could have been written for me Lin! You know what's been going on in my life and so I can relate big time to every line, good luck in the contest - I am going to continue growing older disgracefully lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:21 AM
It's the wiser choice, Jan. Ranting and raving about aging only puts more wrinkles on faces and in places best not mentioned. Thanks!
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