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Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars Contest  ~  Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

   November 6, 2023

Frailty and aging are flaws in bodies of mankind Viral afflictions are infectious and pose grave danger Death from new diseases instantly come to mind making us wary of shaking hands with a stranger Toxins float in the air and swim in waters we drink No longer is it just the elderly that succumb Reasons why the world faces chaos on the brink But with faith the spirit soars without feeling glum Health issues can make a soul see things more clearly When it's been awakened, I find my spirit soaring I'm aware of beauty around me, and not just merely with a glance, but I feel the wildling wind roaring I find myself wanting to take flight like eagles in the sky anticipating storm clouds to feel raindrops on my face I know everything I've been given, but no longer ask why for I've learned to accept gifts within a sweet embrace My body is flesh and bone; my spirit is a different entity One that will not abandon me nor let feebleness win It has the power to exist in me as a blissful identity, a fortress of strength, a paradigm I call my linchpin Despite infirmities plaguing me when each day is done, my enthusiasm for life is professed with sincere meaning I cannot wrap my ailing body inside a cocoon, finely spun, so, I give thanks to my spirit for its benevolent intervening.

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Date: 11/8/2023 8:24:00 AM
Excellent way to approach each new day, Lin. I like your entry for the contest, especially the next to last verse, about the spirit and its power to exist. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/11/2023 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Bill.
Date: 11/6/2023 3:54:00 PM
a truly inspirational read, Lin. You're right. Health issues can make someone see more clearly. I've experienced that reality in the past year...came to the same soul affirmations as you have. I can't wrap myself in a cocoon...but I give thanks every day for my enduring soul. On another note, I understand you live in East Texas. I attended East Texas State back in the day...loved that part of Texas. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 11/11/2023 7:39:00 AM
I apologize for just seeing your comments and Bill's, Sara. I live in New Orleans... east of Texas. lol Maybe that's how you thought I was in East Texas. Thanks for liking this one.
Date: 11/6/2023 1:27:00 PM
Very thought provoking Lin and so true, although our bodies age with time our minds stay young. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. My mind fluctuates between ages 40 and 2. ;-)
Date: 11/6/2023 1:13:00 PM
Very nice poem! My favorite line: Health issues can make a soul see things more clearly.
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Date: 11/6/2023 1:56:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, ~Aa.
Date: 11/6/2023 6:51:00 AM
A great write/picture. Love It... Age is just a number until you have pain. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 11/6/2023 9:10:00 AM
I will be writing a bit later and thanks for your encouragement, Paula.
Date: 11/6/2023 6:47:00 AM
I call this a perfect poem. it defines exactly how I also feel,not that I'm aging and fading, but that my person in itself is whole. Today will be good. Thank you for keeping me in touch with life.
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Date: 11/6/2023 9:10:00 AM
Hi Hilda and thanks for your positive thoughts. Sooooo much better than being pessimistic.
Date: 11/6/2023 6:13:00 AM
This could have been written for me Lin! You know what's been going on in my life and so I can relate big time to every line, good luck in the contest - I am going to continue growing older disgracefully lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2023 6:21:00 AM
It's the wiser choice, Jan. Ranting and raving about aging only puts more wrinkles on faces and in places best not mentioned. Thanks!

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