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Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars

I was in the hospital at only five, the medicine gave me a big hive. Sunday school taught us to be alive, my spirit soared and wanted to drive. When I was seven I got really sick, they gave me ice cream to lick. I loved warm soup with a cheese breadstick, my spirit loved it and soared with a big kick. Now older with aches and pains yet wiser, my spirit soars like a heavenly geyser.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/7/2024 6:19:00 PM

Dear Paula, the creative spirit and essence of your poem is endearing and uplifting. An amazing rhyme! I especially loved your last line for an inspiring finale "my spirit soars like a heavenly geyser." How splendid! And to rhyme "wiser" with "geyser" is ingenious! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/8/2024 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over with your warmest wishes and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my write to be creative spirit/amazing rhyme. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/4/2024 11:23:00 AM

I’m so pleased that your spirit soared Paula, even though you were in the wars. I experienced illness as a child too, thank goodness my spirit soared the same as yours. Congratulations on your win in Silent One’s contest… Belle x

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/5/2024 6:43:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing this one. Illness as a child is not fun. Yes, our spirit soared. Hooray!!! Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/4/2024 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your top-winning placement with this lovely and well-crafted poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2024 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my write and found it to be lovely/well-crafted. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2024 6:47:00 AM

"1 Place" ~ Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars~Date Written:10/31/2023 ~~

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2024 12:17:00 PM

Were you really in hospital at the age of 5? This wasn't really a contest, but an opportunity to showcase an Na poem..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/4/2024 6:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you like my fun write. I was in the hospital at age 5,6,8 all for different surgeries. No Fun For A Kid. Thank You for having this "Can't believe it was a NA." Thank You for my placement. I enjoyed finding it for you to read. Hope you will do it again sometime. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/1/2023 1:35:00 PM

A fave! Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/2/2023 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you like my fun write. I see FAV??? You just made my day happy. Thank You... Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Deb M

Date: 10/31/2023 3:31:00 PM

Lovely poem Paula! Enjoyed it…Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 9:08:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/31/2023 2:49:00 PM

I can identify with almost every line in your poem. Now I'm older with lots of aches, yet wiser like you. Loved your poem, Paula. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you love my write. Yes, age brings aches/pains but I still say age is just a number. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/31/2023 1:39:00 PM

Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars~Date Written:10/31/2023 ~~ Body ails yet spirit soars Poetry Contest ~~