Body / Mind / Spirit

soul stasis unbound ego formed on sea shell ground flesh frame flogged and bound

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Elijah Prophet

Date: 2/6/2009 7:21:00 PM

thank you so much Deborah The Prophetess. Indee we are all beautiful and worth love, but i have not found her whom my soul loveth yet. I know that i have a missing rib(my eve). I know there is a eve out there somewhere who is missing her Adam. We just have not found each other yet. my e-mail is(wonderingboy82@yahoo.com and my cell is 832-267-9930. how worthy am I. Your poem is with great beauty and depth. Thank you for your kindness. Peace Out.

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 1/29/2009 11:53:00 AM

Hi Deborah.. yes you are right it is "mache" ... tch me and my spelling..... a "Yob" in England a yob is someone who doesn't bother with intelligence, often crude, violent, loud and unaware of anything subtle.... Really liked this haiku Deborah great title, fits very well...

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/28/2009 5:42:00 PM

Woe, you made a monorhyme senryu. Great job...Raul