Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Bob

Bob, a poor boy that has nothing; will not bow down to any king
Dad, his Lady, and old Nana too; do not know what Bob can do
With a strong faith, Bob walks blindly; a path of Divinity finally
Bringing a poor boy to a giant hill, on top a big bright void to fill
God and only Son, Christ, cry; as BOB is watching and  slowly walking by
                          Looking back, thinking "Shall I ?"

Inspired by Nikko Palmario's Contest " Life without U & Me "

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Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson July 8, 2010 at 8:41 PM Congrats on being featured! Rhonda Hero

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2010 at 3:42 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup HG my forever friend. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Adeleke Adeite July 5, 2010 at 12:04 PM Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 5, 2010 at 11:33 AM Congrats HG on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..

Janette Fisher July 5, 2010 at 7:42 AM Many congrats on your feature and win in the contest. Rgds Janette

July 4, 2010 at 7:36 PM A contest win and a featured poem for this one. Wow! You must be pleased. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Doris Culverhouse July 3, 2010 at 8:33 PM great job with no ume's!!

Carolyn Devonshire July 3, 2010 at 3:37 PM A big congrats on your win, HG. This is a very inspiring write and well deserving of recognition. Have a wonderful holday weekend! I'm coming to NH on July 20! Hope the weather will be a little cooler there. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick July 3, 2010 at 12:52 PM HG, I knew it, I knew it..HGs a winner..congrats my dear one. BG

Daniel Cwiak July 3, 2010 at 9:27 AM Beautiful poetry! Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2010 at 11:32 PM Congratulations, HG. HOpe you are doing fine for this July 4 weekend!

James Fraser July 2, 2010 at 11:28 AM Wonderful poem HG, this was quite a challenge and you have captured it well. Many congratulations on your win >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown July 2, 2010 at 9:25 AM Congratulations HG on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway July 2, 2010 at 8:57 AM Amazing poem, so full of faith and doubt! Congrat's on your win, you deffinately deserve it!~Tirzah~

July 2, 2010 at 8:33 AM Keep that faith shining. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 2, 2010 at 8:29 AM Hi HG! Super glad you made the corrections on time with this thought-provoking write :) hoping that Bob did the right thing---congrats again! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 2, 2010 at 7:44 AM Congrats HG on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u as only my silent beau can do.. forever your "Sweetheart" from Hawaii with luv .. AlohA..at 4 a.m..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2010 at 6:16 PM Nice character drawing not using U M E. Good luck in the contest

Doris Culverhouse June 28, 2010 at 4:29 PM good one, I need to try this.

Barbara Gorelick June 28, 2010 at 4:10 PM You must have an IQ that soars..I still havent figured out how to do this.Love, BG