Boatswain

His life raft drifted helplessly in an ocean of tears and lost dreams

		In tangible finite and impermanent flow

He lost his compass and the needle festered in Tom’s purulent arm

		A portal to hot flushes of receding pain

Chasing sea dragons and hobgoblins he punctured reality’s voyage

		Fixation gripped an underworld of relief

Rudderless he floated fuelled by psychedelic currents of reprieve

		Full of intrigue for surfing waves of delusion

He floated perilously before he submerged in uncharted waters

		Unable to navigate he sunk like a stone

Emergency flares reached stars but failed to hook into the sun

		As one single ray refused to yield revelation

Yet when he crushed at rock bottom and scratched translucent surfaces

		One more shot blasted spontaneous combustion

Dissolved in oblivion by pirates Tom finally took off his eye patch

		And realized that they patronize his demise


18th January 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Chiri Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Nice write Kai thanks for your entry, and congrats on placing!
Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 6:35 PM
Ooh, a fun write; good story.
Neumann Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Thank you M.L. I appreciate that. The first step to recovery is to take off that eye patch. Kind wishes, Kai
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 4:38 AM
A pirate poem with punch! "Chasing sea dragons and hobgoblins he punctured reality’s voyage" - This is terrific!
Neumann Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you so much Caren. I appreciate that. I wrote the poem for the current 8 word challenge. Kind wishes, Kai
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