Boatman's Elegy

her hand cold with the death of romance
obligatory touch
we watched it erode like a mountain chipped away by cheap winds 
irretrievably sad
but still the flowers roll out, the cards keep coming
the quick peck kisses and morning goodbyes
the syringe shooting shared history into nostalgic veins

as dark radio rains throw branches against our chopin windowpanes

forever stuck in this merry mad dog affair
nightfall- sleep cascades death valley summer selling brooklyn bridge coffins that could fill mystery oceans in the space that lay between us
in this long forgotten sunken ship bed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:20 PM
This is just stunning...love it.
Amitin Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:23 PM
thank you very much Faye..i'm really glad it resonates with you
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