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Boat Trip

Sedate me with your splashes,
Refresh me in the rain,
Whip me with the crashes,
The crashes of the wave,
Soak my skin, make it wet,
Water be my salty slave,
Soak my skin so I’ll forget,
The many things I often crave.

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Beata Agustin

June 26, 2025 at 2:15 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:03 PM

JASMINE, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 22, 2009 at 11:09 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Jasmine. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

December 21, 2009 at 10:10 PM

Dear Jasmine, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 8:29 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty