Boat Ride

If this be the sweep of Venice Where gondola cradles Love’s tryst-- Then lilt I shall on ride’s glazed ease As stars flood magic spells-- Bewitched! Contest for Memento Of Waves Carly Lalion 8 Mar 2015 Visual #2

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 10:26:00 PM

this one is magical. congrats on a well deserved win.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2015 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carly. a 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2015 1:44:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 10:36:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Carly. Congratulations! Kim :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2015 9:35:00 AM

And this poem is also, bewitched and magical !! Congratulations !

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/27/2015 12:10:00 AM

Captivating and romantic, Carly...congrats on your great win! Hugs, Rhonda

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/26/2015 8:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win...I always wanted to visit Venice :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/26/2015 5:33:00 PM

romantic Carly congrats on win hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2015 4:25:00 PM

stand-out in the romance department, carly...love you word choices.. thank you for joining and big congrats.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2015 3:43:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/19/2015 8:32:00 PM

Your descriptive use of language and your suburb imagery are second to none. Well written. Emile. #7

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:06:00 PM

beautifully creative Carly good luck in th contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx