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Boat Ride

If this be the sweep of Venice
Where gondola cradles
Love’s tryst--
Then lilt I shall on ride’s glazed ease 
As stars flood magic spells--

8 Mar 2015

Copyright © Carly Lalion | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2015 at 10:26 PM

this one is magical. congrats on a well deserved win.

March 27, 2015 at 2:27 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carly. a 7

March 27, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

March 27, 2015 at 10:36 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Carly. Congratulations! Kim :)

Carrie Richards

March 27, 2015 at 9:35 AM

And this poem is also, bewitched and magical !! Congratulations !

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 27, 2015 at 12:10 AM

Captivating and romantic, Carly...congrats on your great win! Hugs, Rhonda

March 26, 2015 at 8:47 PM

Congrats on your win...I always wanted to visit Venice :)

Shadow Hamilton

March 26, 2015 at 5:33 PM

romantic Carly congrats on win hugs

March 26, 2015 at 4:25 PM

stand-out in the romance department, carly...love you word choices.. thank you for joining and big congrats.. huggs

March 26, 2015 at 3:43 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 19, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Your descriptive use of language and your suburb imagery are second to none. Well written. Emile. #7

March 7, 2015 at 2:06 PM

beautifully creative Carly good luck in th contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

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