Boat of Freedom

Hazel the eyes that dim on flight
And gazing low, she pauses there
On royal boat to rest on quay.
Fair princess knows what to rewrite
While bridal court duly prepares
Against her will, she rows away.


Senses For A Sextet
Ashley Conte. 11/8/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gorelick Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 11:06 PM
An original take on the picture. congrats on your fine work. BG
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:41 AM
A very different interpertaiton of the painting..It has good rhythm and flow..Enjoyed reading t his one..Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:09 PM
I love your fresh interpretation of the painting. Nicely done, nicely won. Congratulations.
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