Boarding Lost Ships Into Vast Unknown Seas

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Robert J. Lindley, 9-16-2017

Rhyme, subject- (The Ravages of Alzheimers)


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Total # Syllables: 160
Total # Words: 120

Note- The unknown , the horrors ones mind can conjure up are all there waiting for the time when clear mind has eroded into a weakened state and life's memories vanish to be replaced by those imagine horrors. The greater the mind's capacity for imagination, the greater and more horrible the terrors.

 

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/05/29/op...s.html?mcubz=1

A Portrait of the Ravages of Alzheimer’s

Boarding Lost Ships Into Vast Unknown Seas

Taking lost ships into vast, unknown seas
sadly, with dark black sails set to full mast;
sailing forth despite many urgent pleas
to hold onto precious memories past.

Gone, heartfelt treasures one holds deep and dear
like wisps of smoke in a swirling whirlwind;
struggling against depression and great fear
of that deep abyss waiting at the end.

Midnight waves arrive to wash life's slate clean
with a silent blink they exist no more;
so like grass, no longer vast, lush and green
soon ahead will be just an empty shore!

Tried, shooting vanishing ships full of holes
rescue memories before they are gone;
but those long shot volleys, take heavy tolls
and cut deep into these old fragile bones.

Robert J. Lindley, 9-16-2017
Rhyme , subject (The Ravages of Alzheimers )


Note- The unknown , the horrors ones mind can conjure up are all there waiting for the time when clear mind has eroded into a weakened state and life's memories vanish to be replaced by those imagine horrors. The greater the mind's capacity for imagination, the greater and more horrible the terrors.

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Date: 9/18/2017 7:10:00 PM
A powerful piece vividly conveying the terror that one feels. There is a lot of strength in your words that will help to spread understanding so no one suffers alone. A remarkable poignant write Robert. you are a gifted writer, a great pleasure to read. a fave... many blessings to you
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Date: 9/17/2017 4:51:00 PM
Great write!! Robert, You are so right, we do not choose what we forget. I had a father in law whom died due to complications to Dementia. And I was co-caregiver. I'm not a fan of it at all. It's hard for both the person and the caregivers. Again be blessed you and yours. Wonderful words. James :D
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Date: 9/17/2017 12:32:00 AM
Robert such clever and powerful words describing such a horrible state of mind. I wrote about this subject not as well as you, Remember Me In Your Memories. Truly one of the best writes I've read all year.
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Michael. I read your fine poem on the subject and you did a wonderful job of showing the great sorrow this disease brings into our lives.
Date: 9/16/2017 11:58:00 PM
I feel the fear Robert and I have witnessed first hand the devastating effects of Dementia on family members. Please check out the amazing cure that Charlottes Web CBD Oil has to offer. I have sent you a soup mail on this, but maybe you did not read it? You are truly an amazing poet, and as I have told you before one of the Best on this site. This is an amazing poem, powerful and poignant, and definitely one for the Fave List. Thanks for sharing....Maria xx
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Maria, I will check it out today. I think I may have read your soupmail about it but forgot to act upon it. I hope people understand, we do not get to choose what we forget.
Date: 9/16/2017 7:46:00 PM
Powerful, well-written piece, Robert! Janice
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Janice. I will check it out today. I think I may have read your soupmail about it but forgot to act upon it. I hope people understand, we do not get to choose what we forget.
Date: 9/16/2017 6:37:00 PM
A strong piece of work Robert, a difficult subject to relay. I cannot comprehend the fear of forgetting who you are,or was and that loved ones become strangers. Thank you for posting your poem, kind regards, Kevin
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Kevin. Thoughts on the looming darkness to come , invade even before they finally do arrive.
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