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the spring's warming wisp heats the summer blaze sunshine's delicate first kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/15/2013 12:27:00 AM
VERY nice!
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:14:00 PM
John it's good but it is a haiku....David
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John Beam
Date: 3/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thanks, david.
Date: 3/6/2013 11:29:00 PM
Nice work John, this is more of a haiku.
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John Beam
Date: 3/7/2013 4:32:00 AM
Thanks Raul, I was not sure which to place it under but I started with the idea of personification and with the title decided on Senryu.
Date: 3/6/2013 9:19:00 PM
so sweet....:) like this piece,,,thanks friend for sharing <3 Sk
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John Beam
Date: 3/7/2013 4:18:00 AM
Thanks for comment and thank you for sharing