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BLUSH OF PINK

When velvet petals blend with moonlit drips I wander in full joy of a skyline’s hue, evenings chant drifting through an eclipse time away from rushed hours, while air brings dew. I wander in full joy of skyline’s debut, laced flowers tasting a hint of basil, time away from rushed hours, while air spills dew when color of blush deepens, my cheeks thrill. Laced flowers tasting a hint of basil, boughs adorn the garden in twilight , when color of blush deepens, my cheeks thrill as mixture of red and white grow bright. Boughs adorn the garden like nature's play evenings chime, drifting on an eclipse as blend of red and white glints away, when velvet nigh-hours trail with moonlit dips.

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Date: 7/5/2017 2:41:00 PM
I definitely felt the atmosphere in this poem, sweet write! Congrats on winning 7th place in the Happy Days contest! :)
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:35:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette :) and great win too!!
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Date: 7/27/2016 3:02:00 AM
Your piece has rich imagery and color!! Congrats Nette, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:28:00 PM
It made me happy. I kept envisioning a feminine, fairy/witchy (good) forest dweller. Congratulations on your placement! :-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:50:00 PM
I too am happiest in nature. Congrats and a big hug.
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Date: 7/24/2016 6:01:00 PM
Nice win. Royal
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this descriptive piece Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:51:00 PM
Hello Nette, ~~loving the pink thoughts from your pen. Nice win.......... SKAT~~
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Date: 10/30/2013 2:47:00 AM
Such a great writer! Congrats, Nette! Aja, Pinoy! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:45:00 PM
nice win.......PD
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Date: 10/29/2013 5:06:00 AM
- Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:44:00 PM
Nette...that was so freak'n cool! I've never read a Pantoum before...never knew what one was. But, now I feel as though I've been properly shown by a talent far surpassing my own. Much love . CTB
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:48:00 PM
this is gorgeous Nette....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:50:00 PM
An outstanding poem..So many inspiring and beautiful poems to entertain me today.This gem goes to my fvs
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:10:00 AM
A charming writing, embedded with a want for travels into a new realm of bliss & serenity. Beautifull done!
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:08:00 AM
An excellent pantoum you've penned my dear friend Nette! Kudos w/ big hugs! You did it very well. Hope I can write correct pantoum when I have time. This is a diff. form 4 me. I'm so glad I've time @ soup today. Went home directly after schl. I wasn't here @ soup yestrday 'cuz of a whole day schl act. 7am-6.30pm. Well, thank you so much for this precious gem & your time to enjoy & leave nice comments on my poem. I'm glad no more typhoon there. Thank USM! tcare! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/29/2013 8:00:00 PM
In twilight's view the stars reign in your incredible poem here my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening write this evening! What a brilliant piece, you have definitely brought awe to my eyes and imagination with this awesome poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:13:00 PM
you painted words in colour very beautiful
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Date: 9/29/2013 5:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your unique and expressive work..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments encourage me to continue writing..Sara
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Date: 9/29/2013 5:32:00 PM
Truly gorgeous.
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:20:00 PM
this is gorgeous Nette beautifully written Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/29/2013 3:03:00 PM
... just love it, Nette - Well done, my dear friend !!!! -oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2013 1:46:00 PM
Hi there thanks so much for stopping by my verses! Hope all is well with you? A spooky write for a spooky season! Light & Love
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Nette! Your last line is amazing! Along with the beauty of this poem! Jimbo
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