Blush of Innocence

"A spell cast beneath the moon will not grant what a lonely heart desires." ~Poet's quote She wears the feverish pink blush of innocence But this young enchantress has painted her own cheeks. Her dark eyes, smoke shadowed, she intends wickedness, casting a spell with the mystical words she speaks. As a barn owl watches with intense suspicion, condoning her sorcery with shrill piercing taunts. Poised, she continues with tenacious petition, chanting the words of havoc on the man she wants. Beneath the pallid glimmer of the haloed moon she summons a nebulous mist up from the sea. Then, softly singing a beguiling old fey tune, croons 'til an avian flock appears from her plea. Ravens do the bidding of her archaic charm. With an eerie gleam shining in their beady eyes, they'll encircle the man with their cries of alarm, cawing the curse to make him love her by sunrise. She wears the feverish pink blush of innocence, As a barn owl watches with intense suspicion. Beneath the pallid glimmer of the haloed moon, Ravens do the bidding of her archaic charm. December 9, 2020 My Created Form~Rhyme4 Mix Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/15/2020 4:06:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this wonderful poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:28:00 AM
Thank you for such wonderful comments and a placement in your contest, Constance. It was an inspirational theme to play the part of an enchantress.
Date: 12/13/2020 6:50:00 PM
Literally word witchcraft! Superb! Congrats on your win, Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker. Your comments are so encouraging.
Date: 12/13/2020 3:28:00 PM
Hi Jenna, You have a with words and you know how to use them. Your imagination soared in this well-written write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:27:00 AM
Aww thanks so much for your sweet remarks, Alexis. I appreciate your many visits.
Date: 12/13/2020 12:18:00 PM
Heya Jenna, this is captivating poetry I can imagine a narrator reading this poem whilst Maleficent casts her spell in the movie, really is that good, A top winner congratulations, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:26:00 AM
Thanks so much for the generous comments, David. Maleficent would be perfect to speak these words!
Date: 12/10/2020 12:17:00 PM
Jenna, this is amazing poetry my friend, very deep, creative and riddled with fantasy and an amazingly vivid imagination - keep that magic pen spilling Jenna, excellent! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/10/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly for such sweet compliments, Jennifer. You're always so encouraging.
Date: 12/9/2020 7:52:00 AM
I have images of witches and witchcraft in my head, quite dark imagery Jenna. Well composed and im sure Constance will love this one. Tom
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Date: 12/9/2020 12:40:00 PM
Oh, the things some will do for love...It was headed in an even darker direction until I chased some of the raven away. LOL Thanks, Tom, for your unwavering support.
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