Blueberry Pie

Just saying the words "blueberry pie"
changes the way you feel.
And it's no wonder it finds a place of honor
at the end of a home-cooked meal,
for there is no need to pit nor peel
this sweet-tart low-bush fruit,
just add a dash of sugar and a flaky shell
and a little bit of love to boot.

When you say the words "blueberry pie"
most everyone turns their head,
anxious to learn if they can have a taste
for it's better than cake or cornbread.
And isn't it fun to see its purply goo 
on your fingers or encircling your lips,
or showing everyone your purply tongue
as though you were in a pie-eating championship?

And have you ever smelled a blueberry pie
emerging hot and fresh from the oven?
Does the aroma trigger a thousand fond memories
and send you into the kitchen running?
And is there anything more enticing to see
than a slice dripping with vanilla ice cream?
And then gobbling an extra slice or two
is like living out a blueberry dream.

And who used to bake those blueberry pies?
Your grandmother or a neighborly friend?
And didn't its savory buttery crusts
make you want dessert time to never end?
So how do we know that a blueberry pie
has changed the way you feel?
That look in your eye and that smile on your face
are quite hard to conceal.

copyright © 2019 Gregory Firlotte

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/28/2024 4:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/5/2019 8:19:00 PM
Hello Gregory … nicely written and rhymed on a topic that is popular in the US but I have never eaten. We often have raw fruit or mixed with plain yoghurt. Blue berry shrubs can only be grown in a few areas in Australia due to soil requirements - thank you Gregory; enjoyed - Lindsay
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/5/2019 10:50:00 PM
Lindsay -- thank you! Perhaps someday you'll have some blueberry pie -- and then the poem will come to life. Cheers to you!
Date: 9/5/2019 11:20:00 AM
Oh, YUM.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/5/2019 11:40:00 AM
Fresh baked blueberry pie served smothered in hot custard. Favouritest food ever.
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Gregory Joseph Firlotte
Date: 9/5/2019 11:22:00 AM
I know! How I love blueberry anything!
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