Bluebell River

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Bluebells curtsy mildew pasture Vibrant, submissive, indigo chimes Blooms convene, witnessing daybreak Vain, boastful, early spring unveils, English bulbs amidst sweet woodland scent. Floral rivers flourishing below The matured red stags weary hooves, Strength, stamina, amongst delicate, petite Burnt auburn fur, greets azure petal streams - Beneath April's succulent trees.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2021 9:03:00 AM

This went straight to my fave list.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/30/2021 11:02:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2021 5:34:00 PM

What a cornucopia of vibrant, majestic imagery, all touched by tranquility. Bravo, Joanna! Peace, Gershon

Joanna Feltham
Date: 7/15/2021 1:58:00 AM

Thank you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/14/2021 2:12:00 PM

Joanna, this is just lovely, serene and filled with the music of nature. Thank you for sharing this delight! Blessings.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/19/2021 3:30:00 PM

Sometime I hope you get to see the Bluebonnets when they bloom in Texas. Totally different landscape but equally as beautiful.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 7/14/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thank you. I really wanted to capture the beauty of the Bluebells here in the UK