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Blue Winter

on overcast days
damp winter winds sigh and moan
grieving over you

sadseasonssenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2014 at 5:28 PM

Tim, BIG congrats for your win. Love the title you gave it to. soupmail.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 25, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Lovely scene created by apt images, Tim. congrats

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 3:39 PM

Tim, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

April 11, 2014 at 9:52 PM

Tim, :) Congratulations, In Andrea's Itty bitty contest.... Goodnight ~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2014 at 1:39 PM

- Congratulations on your win in: "Itty Bitty" contest, Tim !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2014 at 10:48 PM

Tim, I can see below that I had seen this one before but of course could not remember who wrote it. Wanted to tell you that I loved all my HM's. they are beautiful poems but I put them down here for not putting itty bitty in the title line. this would have scored at least a three or four otherwise!! me and my rules, huh?

James Fraser

April 5, 2013 at 8:00 PM

To the gone, but remembered, we shall always pause, grieve. We then move on to where, knowing that they are here. Memorable words to both reader and writer. Have a lovely weekend my Spotify friend :) xx

Anne Rutherford

March 31, 2013 at 5:17 PM

A deep and profound Senryu Tim, makes you a bit sad. Also hopeful for the warm spring to follow .Anne

Sukmawati Komala

March 31, 2013 at 8:11 AM

what a sweet and beautiful write dear Tim.. love this piece much <3 Happy Easter dearest one <3 much luv and lights

Sherese Gooden

March 28, 2013 at 7:11 AM

This another hauntingly beautiful poem, Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

March 28, 2013 at 5:35 AM

Hi Tim..this give me a feeling of loss and loniliness..Its a very beautiful sad senryu indeed..Charma

Andrea Dietrich

March 27, 2013 at 12:04 AM

wow, I love this one, tim. If I did not have so much to do tonight, I'd stop and read more of your poetry. I have to go type up some tests for classes tomorrow. UGGG. And already it is after midnight!!