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Blue Wings

From dawn, you've been the gentle glide upon my tranquil streams of morrow's sky alight. You've curved the earth and spanned blue wings in flight. Through life, you float on rising streaks of dawn. Through life, in motion, in your sun-kissed face, your path is shown to me in dusky sink of sun and stirs my softening reds to pink. From dawn, you sprang from light's eternal grace. From dawn, you've been a hue of blush in truth, bold and bare, transformed in love's essence. As breezes tame, you flow like heaven's breath, and through life's beauty, days return to youth. From dawn, I cling to you and you to I. Through life, we drift just like blue butterflies.
Written 2/13/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/17/2017 12:50:00 PM
Well done for this beautiful sonnet, Rhonda. I had not realized that you were back posting and commenting. Perhaps it's because I have not been too active myself! Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/15/2017 5:41:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful. You have created scenes in the mind that are whimsical and mesmerizing. I love the form as well, the repeating phrases really hold the reader. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/14/2017 10:37:00 PM
You have a lovely way with your poetic words, Rhonda...simply beautiful and inspiring! Such a treat to read. :)
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Date: 2/14/2017 3:20:00 PM
So beautifully written and well expressed it flows across the page. Nicely done. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/13/2017 1:50:00 PM
wow!! love the flow and the rhyme a 7 Hugs
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:33:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem Rhonda...Well penned..A7..and a fave..
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:59:00 AM
Lovely write. You have left me with a nice warm smile upon my face. Thank you.
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Date: 2/13/2017 3:33:00 AM
- A wonderful journey, Rhonda - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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