Blue Willow Tree

She stood beneath the spreading tree
and looked out far, across the sea
with wide eyes wonder , to the sky, 
and softly wished to ask him why

her love that had to go so far, 
across the waters, to a War
but just returned , was dancing rain, 
that seemed to cry and say his name

and look, a Willow tree that sheltered her, 
was like a sigh, against the sky
had branches like a comfort cloak,
but tempest shadows , returned like smoke

she wont forget their walks of green,
bare foot on days, in summers , seen
a sky of blue, like butterflies, 
on Willow Tree, it rested high

Forget me knots and cornflowers blue,
a scene of wheatfields , its harvests new         
he made a garland &  held her hand
and gently left, for foreign lands

so she looked again across the sea
beneath the blue,
Blue Willow Tree.

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Date: 7/8/2025 9:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have a wonderful day writing away........
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/8/2025 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Paula, l love the creativeness of poetry, seeing where it take ideas to unfold into a imaginary story, its such a lot of fun.x
Date: 7/8/2025 8:21:00 AM
Jacqueline, this is beautiful!
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/8/2025 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim. l had a poem theme for blue a few days ago and jotted a few lines then picked it up today to see where it would take me. l wanted 'willow tree' to be included then added blue and let the lines almost write them selves from my imagination. Only when l finished did l realise l have 'blue willow' plates.Not sure if it was a subconscious idea enfolding but l still like this poem. Thats what l love about writing poetry, l never know where its going to take me. x
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