Blue Water Bird

lord 
let me
tidy up some things
now
reincarnated
as a blue water bird
appeared with wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Gregory - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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April 9, 2009 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann
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April 7, 2009 at 7:07 PM
Congrats on your write..Blessings
Austin Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Great image....kind of zenish. Congrats. Love, daver
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April 6, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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April 6, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Interesting view in this one. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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April 6, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Lovely. Love, Shar
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April 6, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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April 6, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Hi Gregory, short but vividly, intellectually-penned. I like it. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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April 5, 2009 at 5:42 PM
I loved this one. love always, your friend, Helen :)
Shango Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Awesome, Gregory. Very concise with a depth deeper than a mirror. Peace and love
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