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Blue Velvet

Lost in a sea of blue velvet she dances, by the rhythm of aquamarine eyes Beneath a parapet of stars where no one can foretell, the sparkle of a smile is waving its goodbyes; to loneliness to sorrow to solitude of morrow Soft landings on the moon, they hold on to each other as they twirl inside an ocean of cobalt blue; Above, the heavens like birds of paradise soar dipping their hearts inside each others gold until they are no more. The world falls away at their feet as two star crossed lovers become love's paraclete in a dreamers world where fantasies curl the azure blue hurl of a boy and a girl. By: Mystic Rose

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Date: 10/3/2023 1:33:00 PM
what a melodious write! Loved the azure blue hurl of a boy and girl. You created some beautiful lines and imagery. Nicely done! enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 9/30/2023 12:49:00 PM
It is so much fun to imagine what your words look as I read. A blue love melody. I love the words you use to describe the color blue. My mother used to sing songs from George Gershwin's Rhapsody In Blue Awwww..my absolute favorite color. I loooove this poem.
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Date: 9/21/2023 10:26:00 PM
Those opening lines! I am in awe how creative and beautiful is that! Truly drew me in! Every line you’ve woven here is just beyond impeccable! This one is a definite fave for me i love the imagery and flow and wordplay so exquisite and heartfelt. Congratulations on winning well deserved it is
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:00:00 PM
Dear Vienna, your exceptional piece on a complex subject was truly enlightening. The vivid imagery, skillful employment of metaphors, and compelling arguments showcased in your writing are truly magnificent. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thankyou Sotto, I'm honored that you loved it enough to place it 1st place. Truly delighted.
Date: 9/21/2023 3:04:00 PM
Absolutely love this dreamy read dear Rose. So many gorgeously poetic lines,’ the sparkle of a smile is waving its goodbyes’ ‘ dipping their hearts inside each others gold’. Glorious. The ending lines are so wonderful too. Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you. Smiles to you :):)
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Christina
Date: 9/19/2023 2:24:00 AM
Fantastic, love the blues and the hues, Vie:)
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment Joanna
Date: 9/18/2023 4:38:00 AM
Oh my, the opening line really drew my attention and the whole give of this piece is beautifully oceanic.. 'Blue velvet" Such a gorgeous word pairing to describe the sea.. "Rhythm of aquamarine eyes", "beneath a parapet of stars" Very whimsical this is :)
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:19:00 PM
Thanks for leaving a comment dear Hiya, much appreciated
Date: 9/17/2023 2:07:00 PM
Ooh, Brandy would love this. Heck, I love this. "Soft landings on the moon they hold onto each other". Quite dreamy Rose
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Date: 9/21/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for leaving a comment Tom
Date: 9/17/2023 7:48:00 AM
This is such a delightful read..
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Date: 9/17/2023 10:34:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the verse Silent One, if I lived on bread alone and love, I'd be satiated every time :) have a peaceful day dear friend
Date: 9/17/2023 6:04:00 AM
A delightful read adorned in your beautiful words, Vienna. In a dreamers world where fantasies curl --how fabulous an ending, my friend.
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Date: 9/17/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for your gentle visit Vijay, may you have a precious day :)

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