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Blue Thoughts of You Here I’m sat gazing into space Picturing that magnetic face It’s been so long since your goodbye Never knowing the reason why. Suddenly the bubble had burst Ravaged dreams unseen and unheard Expired entrancing romancing Ending magic moonlight dancing. Lovebirds forever, I believed Till finding your love had deceased My heart’s broken beyond repair I wonder if you even care. Do you envision me in dreams As I do you in sleepy scenes Or look back on our love story A sweet souvenir of glory. It’s arduous to face each day The darkness never fades away If only we could turn back time That once again our souls entwine. There'll never be another who I could gift my devotion to You're the guardian of my heart Even though we are kept apart. Despite pondering where you are To me you are a super star Glistening brightly, fervently My other half eternally. *+*+* 27th October 2022 *+* Painting prompted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY Image chosen - No.1 151 words

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2022 11:07:00 AM

So many beautiful poems inspired by this challenge, and yours is certainly one of them, Belle.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/15/2023 2:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/29/2022 10:16:00 PM

Nostalgically beautiful. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/2/2022 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj, so appreciated… Belle

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/28/2022 4:00:00 PM

Wow! This is excellent Belle. A beautiful poem prompted by that painting. So well written . I hope it places high in the contest. :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/29/2022 3:03:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. Blessings Belle -:)

Bill Baker

Date: 10/28/2022 8:28:00 AM

Lovely choice of painting, Belle, an exquisite poem you've penned. The thoughts of not knowing why are the cruelest in my humble opinion. To not know why lets a mind think the worst sometimes. I hope this isn't you, but if it is, I pray God will get you through. It's still better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. Hugs, Bill

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2022 11:35:00 AM

Dear Bill, thank you so much, the poem is fictional written for the painting only. I have seen breakups happen and the heartbreak that comes with it, though sad it’s sometimes inevitable. Hugs back to you too… Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/27/2022 11:17:00 AM

Enjoyed! Aren't dreams wonderful? Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2022 1:43:00 AM

Dreams are wonderful, most of the time. Pleased that you enjoyed the read. Maloha! Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2022 10:35:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I like the chosen picture that goes along. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2022 1:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Sara, the picture was the inspiration for the poem, I hope I did it justice. Bless you… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/27/2022 8:44:00 AM

Belle, my dear friend, you have written a poem that is exceptional and extremely skillfully composed. I really loved this: "It’s arduous to face each day The darkness never fades away If only we could turn back time That once again our souls entwine." so beautiful. Blessings!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2022 1:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Sotto, words truly appreciated. Blessings in return… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2022 8:08:00 AM

Lost love is always a favorite with writers. Your poem may be sad, but your verses are sublime.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/28/2022 1:35:00 AM

Thank you for that Victor, I enjoy putting poetry to a painting that inspires the muse… Belle