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Blue Spring

A feast presented Rainbow's revival Yellows, pinks, purples But colors cure blinds Unrecovered eyes Clinging wet clouds Shadows over Sovereign spring blooms Laid at my feet Sunlit touch Does not salve Winter's wounds I see Only Blue. 4/12/19 for Diminished Hexaverse about Spring contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/29/2019 2:44:00 AM

Lovely! Like in the song: And in each picture I meet you and only you, my spring.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2019 10:58:00 AM

The depth of feeling...Spring does not relieve. Congratulations!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/2/2019 10:04:00 PM

back with congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2019 7:37:00 PM

how creatively you did the blue theme, Michelle. Congrats on a well deserved win.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/27/2019 8:07:00 PM

This is a different take on the theme and one I am sure we all can relate to. Beautiful weather but gloomy inside :(

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/1/2019 5:41:00 PM

Yes, sometimes even perfect weather will leave me feeling a bit cold inside, thanks for your comment!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/15/2019 8:27:00 PM

YYYYEEEESSSSSS! And then there's Blue, blue, blue, blue and even blue! If I seem to like blue...well...

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/16/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thanks, M.L, but in this case 'blue' means sad, like feeling blue, etc-

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/14/2019 12:13:00 AM

Perfect -- at least in the eyes of this beholder. G.L. in the contest, Michelle! Best wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/14/2019 6:16:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment, my friend!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/13/2019 5:25:00 PM

Michelle, your lovely poem is also realistic: spring's beauties don't heal all. Janice

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/14/2019 6:14:00 PM

We had a pretty spring day a while back, but I was in a 'blue' mood and couldn't enjoy it, which inspired this-

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/13/2019 9:04:00 AM

You are an emotionally connected poet. I enjoyed this piece.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/13/2019 5:04:00 PM

Thank you for the visit and comment, Richard, it is much appreciated!