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Blue Shoes

I am so, so blue...
for I lost a love with you,

I walk by myself
down the long stretches of life
wondering, "What did I do!"







For "blue" contest sponsored by Francine Roberts.  / George Aul

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/23/2011 12:18:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win George. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/11/2011 8:18:00 AM Wonderful Tanka!Congrats George on your HM win in this contest--kashinath Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/11/2011 7:46:00 AM Congrats George on your HM in the blue contest with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor ... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/10/2011 10:21:00 PM Glad to see you on the Blue list, George. I really liked this one I had read recently. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/10/2011 7:09:00 PM I said earlier that Francine should like this one, and she did. Congratulations on getting honorable mention in her contest with this entry. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/10/2011 3:44:00 PM Congratulations George on your success in Francine's great contest. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 2/10/2011 2:15:00 PM Just one of the many ways we become blue through relationships. Congratulations on getting a win with writing your tanka with a "blue" beginning, middle and end. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/10/2011 1:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, George. Thanks for you always, kind comments! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/10/2011 12:18:00 PM Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, George. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kory Calhoun Date: 2/10/2011 12:13:00 PM Hi George - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/10/2011 10:54:00 AM Enjoyed the rhyme you put in here as well, George-- congrats on being in the winners' list :) Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 2/10/2011 10:29:00 AM congrats on your Honorable Mention in the contest George Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/9/2011 3:54:00 PM very aptly you have used the word blue for a lostb love, george Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/9/2011 3:06:00 PM Francine should like this one. Great writing. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/9/2011 2:16:00 PM Nicely done, George. Have you seen all the wonderful blue poems.It's very fun to read them all. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/9/2011 11:02:00 AM Great tanka, George, it seems these "long stretches" are lasting a lifetime for me. Francine posted a blog and the title has to be "blue." You also need to add your name at the bottom below the name of the contest. Her blog says these rules must be followed for poems to be considered and I wouldn't want you to miss out on winning! Login to Reply