Caryl Muzzey Poet Rictameter

Blue Rose

Blue Rose
The love flower
Symbolizing lust
An aching desire for love
Inaccessible to retain another    
With good intentions of marriage
Establishing true love
With only one 
Blue Rose

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Carolyn Devonshire June 18, 2010 at 5:43 PM That's a very sharp analogy, Caryl -- th blue rose symbolizing "an aching desire for love." Really like the rictameter form you employed to convey this message. I'm sure you'll do well in the contest with this one! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2010 at 8:04 PM And good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2010 at 8:04 PM Rictameter - I shall look into it. You brought out all about the blue rose.

Joyce Johnson June 15, 2010 at 4:54 PM A lovely rictameter and good luck in the contest . Tahnk you for commenting. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick June 15, 2010 at 4:01 PM Great write that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Good luck with this one...Sara