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Blue Robe of Chenille

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robe of chenille

soft crooning comfort at her breast

robe of chenille

calmed the nightmare, softened chills

when childhood fever reached a crest

soon drifting back to midnight rest

robe of chenille

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In honor of Nette Onclaud's Contest: "Weave a Rondelet"
By Carrie Richards 9/13/11

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/24/2011 5:57:00 PM Congratulations on your win with your Weave A Rondelet poem Carrie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/23/2011 7:52:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Carrie Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/22/2011 7:59:00 PM Carrie, neat idea, A worthy presentation for the contest, Congratulations on your worthy work. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/22/2011 5:46:00 PM Congrats Carrie on another great win for another grand poem luv.. well done.. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/14/2011 3:36:00 AM love it Carrie, best of luck..David Login to Reply

Jack Ross Jr. Date: 9/13/2011 10:33:00 PM Great write lovely Lady Carrie...chenille is so very soft and lucious....good luck on contest....with love....old Jack Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 9/13/2011 10:32:00 PM Carrie, wondrous write, and since I know that night terror (monkey girl had a 103 temperature, turned out to be strep throat) this one hit some personal chords as well. Chenille...sigh... man, don't envy Nette this judging. Lots of lovely reads, some smooth, some rough, many just stellar. Hope this one reaches high heights, though I know for you (and I) it's all about the inspiration and the write. A challenge appreciated and met. Hugs, Cyndi. PS- this challenge you TAMED . Tiger to kitten! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2011 10:31:00 PM this sounds so beautiful. I am not even sure what chenille is but it's a lovely word, like my cashmere!! Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 9/13/2011 9:30:00 PM Carrie~ You brought back memories of my childhood chenille blanket. What an interesting view you created ! Thank you for wonderful poetry lOVE Laura :) OH good luck in the contest I'm sure you'll do well! Login to Reply