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Blue Red - Haiku

Blue Red – Haiku Waves turn the day’s sea Sun sets, burns on horizon One blue, other red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 11/18/2014 10:32:00 AM
I also see white caps and brown sand with dark creeping shadows . . . a sign of a good haiku . . . it pulls you in. Nicely done.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/18/2014 12:19:00 PM
Hi David, I appreciate your comments and observations. Thank you. I find that keeping things simple helps to draw out the complex in nature and life for enjoyment. Blue and red create so much in their simplicity. Have a great day. Earl