Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Blue Moon Last Night

Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right
Let it shine bright, close out of shrouds
Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
For this gift to see I am proud
Gift was gentle,  eager soul took flight
Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right


(First attempt at the style of Triolet.)(My poem "Opportunity" explains about the term "Blue 
Moon".)

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 7, 2010 at 5:00 AM Beautiful! I am speechless. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser January 5, 2010 at 1:16 PM A nice capture Sara, i need to expand my form portfolio, maybe 2010 will be the time? >> James

Richard Craig January 4, 2010 at 5:07 PM great work!!! love love love it...

L'Nass Shango January 4, 2010 at 3:55 PM I think you made a great accomplishment ... great inspiration.

David Byrne January 1, 2010 at 11:32 PM Excellent write. I have heard so much about the blue moon since last night its amazing what interest there is in it!

Doris Culverhouse January 1, 2010 at 4:30 PM I think we saw a little of it when we left aviano's.

Doris Culverhouse January 1, 2010 at 3:16 PM nicely done, hope you had a great beginning today. I did. soup mail.

Sue Mason January 1, 2010 at 2:26 PM Well, I missed it through the rain clouds ... smile ... I've wondered in the 2nd moon in a month is really "blue" and, if it is, why is it blue? Haven't studied the Triolet form yet ... maybe someday ... smile ... thanks for all your wonderful comments and hope 2010 is good for you and yours !

Debbie Guzzi January 1, 2010 at 2:08 PM Nice write there! I love the concept of Blue Moons..I've often thought of writing a novel titled Blue Moon Rising...2nd to last line...did ya miss a "t"? 4th word? Light & Love & Happy New Year!

Charmaine Chircop January 1, 2010 at 12:47 PM I never tried this triolet style..You really did it honour..AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL

Gert W. Knop January 1, 2010 at 10:47 AM Hi Sara, nice and powerful Triolet! Thank you for commenting New Year. Wishing you all the best and keep on with your good writing. Gert

Andrew Crisci January 1, 2010 at 10:27 AM Happy New Year, Sara! Thanks for your comment. Your Triolet is very lovely and romantic, accompained by an imagery so realistic. May your inspiration and talent increase as we husher in the New Year! Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Colleen Bono January 1, 2010 at 9:20 AM This is excellent.Hope you have a Happy New Year.I posted a song called Sissy's Song by Alan Jackson.Please read in my honor.

P Sheart January 1, 2010 at 7:46 AM Sara, a wonderful Triolet!! Anything to do with nature I'm hooked and captivated. Thanks for sharing sweet. Love Light Patty

Elaine George January 1, 2010 at 5:19 AM Lovely Triolet, dear Sara. Yes. In Emily's poem she was writing about the unbearable grief of losing her father and her beau, life felt like a living hell for her as her grief was all consuming and she lived in constant fear of losing someone else she loved, I read her poem and read the material of her life that the poem was based on. All of her works and bio are on the internet. Love, Lainie