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Blue Moon Last Night

Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right
Let it shine bright, close out of shrouds
Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
For this gift to see I am proud
Gift was gentle,  eager soul took flight
Blue moon last night peeked from the clouds
Smoky, blue, ghost whisps moved just right


(First attempt at the style of Triolet.)(My poem "Opportunity" explains about the term "Blue 
Moon".)

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/7/2010 5:00:00 AM Beautiful! I am speechless. Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/5/2010 1:16:00 PM A nice capture Sara, i need to expand my form portfolio, maybe 2010 will be the time? >> James Login to Reply

Richard Craig Date: 1/4/2010 5:07:00 PM great work!!! love love love it... Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 1/4/2010 3:55:00 PM I think you made a great accomplishment ... great inspiration. Login to Reply

David Byrne Date: 1/1/2010 11:32:00 PM Excellent write. I have heard so much about the blue moon since last night its amazing what interest there is in it! Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 1/1/2010 4:30:00 PM I think we saw a little of it when we left aviano's. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 1/1/2010 3:16:00 PM nicely done, hope you had a great beginning today. I did. soup mail. Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 1/1/2010 2:26:00 PM Well, I missed it through the rain clouds ... smile ... I've wondered in the 2nd moon in a month is really "blue" and, if it is, why is it blue? Haven't studied the Triolet form yet ... maybe someday ... smile ... thanks for all your wonderful comments and hope 2010 is good for you and yours ! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/1/2010 2:08:00 PM Nice write there! I love the concept of Blue Moons..I've often thought of writing a novel titled Blue Moon Rising...2nd to last line...did ya miss a "t"? 4th word? Light & Love & Happy New Year! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/1/2010 12:47:00 PM I never tried this triolet style..You really did it honour..AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/1/2010 10:47:00 AM Hi Sara, nice and powerful Triolet! Thank you for commenting New Year. Wishing you all the best and keep on with your good writing. Gert Login to Reply

Andrew Crisci Date: 1/1/2010 10:27:00 AM Happy New Year, Sara! Thanks for your comment. Your Triolet is very lovely and romantic, accompained by an imagery so realistic. May your inspiration and talent increase as we husher in the New Year! Kindest Regards, Andrew. Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 1/1/2010 9:20:00 AM This is excellent.Hope you have a Happy New Year.I posted a song called Sissy's Song by Alan Jackson.Please read in my honor. Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 1/1/2010 7:46:00 AM Sara, a wonderful Triolet!! Anything to do with nature I'm hooked and captivated. Thanks for sharing sweet. Love Light Patty Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 1/1/2010 5:19:00 AM Lovely Triolet, dear Sara. Yes. In Emily's poem she was writing about the unbearable grief of losing her father and her beau, life felt like a living hell for her as her grief was all consuming and she lived in constant fear of losing someone else she loved, I read her poem and read the material of her life that the poem was based on. All of her works and bio are on the internet. Love, Lainie Login to Reply