Blue Moon

Our eyes dazzle for everything that glistens
blinded by diamonds we overlook simplicity throwing away our dignity,to gain the world
a hard cold rock coated with chocolate 
don't waste your last breath, seeking diamonds 
cherish your dignity and admire the beauty of simplicity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 29, 2015 at 2:44 AM
Hi Christopher, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 28, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Christopher, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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August 28, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, I appreciate your welcome message ??
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