Blue Moon

Blue moon swims alone
Wind combs elm leaves splitting-
Piling upon tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Montalbo Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:00 PM
creating a new river for a new moon it seems, well done.... Gina
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Nice, like it, well done --- vivid!
Callus Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Lovely and well expressed. Keep it up. // paul
Goswami Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 2:48 AM
Great dear...touched my heart...Best wishes from India...
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