Blue Moon

Brilliant radiance Splendid celestrial sphere Shimmering Blue Moon

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/30/2010 6:57:00 AM

I had to read this one because I am in the process of writing an arrangement of Blue Moon for solo violin - lots of fun. Great tune. "Shimmering Blue Moon." I like it. Love, Dave

Heather Hill

Date: 5/5/2010 8:58:00 AM

There was definitely one of these over the lake outside my home the other night, what a great descriptive free verse! thanks for sharing!

Amy Green

Date: 5/1/2010 9:37:00 PM

Nice.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/10/2010 9:03:00 AM

Very nicely written Haiku, Kimberly! Especially the second line...And thank you for your comments...Gert

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 1/19/2010 10:26:00 AM

Brilliant Haiku. Wonderful to read you today :)

Elaine George

Date: 1/17/2010 4:53:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2010 5:15:00 PM

Kimberly, Your strategic use of alliteration and imagery make this haiku come alive. Very lovely. Aloha, Connie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/12/2010 2:18:00 PM

This reminded me instantly of Debussy's 'Claire de Lune'... (Now that song will be stuck in my head all day!) Beautiful! - Tim

Adell Foster

Date: 1/10/2010 11:30:00 AM

This is an excellent haiku, great imagery flowing within these perfectly formed lines. I thank you for sharingtheread and for your lovely comments on my poem :-) God Bless, Always,Adell

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2010 6:11:00 PM

A great traditional haiku, Kimberly!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/9/2010 3:37:00 PM

Beautiful and well written Haiku! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

Corinne Curcio

Date: 1/9/2010 12:36:00 PM

Beautiful rendering of our recent blue moon.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/9/2010 8:18:00 AM

Magnificent image of the full moon we had around New Year's, Kimberly. I've been away for a while but am glad I caught this work. Very, very nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/9/2010 8:13:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It lets the imagination see that moon. Thank you for your comments and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Elaine George

Date: 1/6/2010 12:27:00 PM

Beautiful picture you have painted for me with this lovely Haiku, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments.

James Fraser

Date: 1/5/2010 10:33:00 AM

Lovely images i see when i read your wonderful Haiku Kimberly >> James

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/4/2010 3:53:00 PM

A splendid haiku you have penned here...filled with lovely imagery that paints the picture in my mind. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments. Have a blessed day~Mary

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/4/2010 3:54:00 AM

enjoyed this one much. -Robert