Blue Lilies

~~Blue Lilies~~ Did you see the blue lilies bloom? Where we made it out first Embracing each other’s nudity Making love each time you met my eyes I wonder! Did you feel it! My kiss on your earlobe While playing it with my tongue Did it pain? The love bite at the back of your neck! I loved you the most when I planted them I find no blue lilies bloom then But the breeze said it secretly, soon it would! The wetness When your fingers hopped over those petals The fast beating heart When you tried to pluck the petals The pleading nods When you went deep with the art work Are all memories I cherish I find no blue lilies bloom then But the breeze said it secretly, soon it would! The sweat on your brow I smelled it incessantly each time I kissed The odor game you know! I smell your tears I smell your lips and then the hair-tangled chest I smell those heart beats That beat fast when I go wild with you! I find no blue lilies bloom then But the breeze said it secretly, soon it would! Each time you gave a stroke Each time I pushed you out I loved the glittering in your eyes Thoughtful and selfless they were I loved the warmth of your hands Careful and pampering they were Each time you gave a stroke Each time I pushed you out I was be-witched by your innocent smile By your charm By your wild vices I find no blue lilies bloom then But the breeze said it secretly, soon it would! Did you see the blue lilies bloom? Where we made it out first Embracing each other’s nudity Making love each time you met my eyes -puvi- (5/11/16)

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Date: 1/2/2018 8:54:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow. This is beyond gorgeous. Exceptional writing! Ooh la la hot...
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/2/2018 10:47:00 AM
Wow...three wow's from Richard for the poem and that's something...:))) Thanks a lot for the comment ..much love...
Date: 5/30/2017 7:52:00 AM
your free verse has class this flowed like a song
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 5/30/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Liam for the motivating comment..have a happy week
Date: 1/6/2017 7:44:00 PM
Whew... Is it hot in here? : )
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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/7/2017 12:00:00 AM
Puvi, as I was reading your poem, the room did seem to heat up.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/6/2017 10:13:00 PM
Do you feel it so?!
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