Blue Kimono
Blue Kimono 1 (Tanka)
Robed in a blue, white-
flowered kimono, she combs
her hair while I watch,
calmly detangles my mind
before I disrobe to rest.
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Blue Kimono 2 (Tanka)
Robed in a blue, white-
patterned kimono, she combs
her hair while I watch,
calmly detangles my mind
before I disrobe to rest.
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