Beata Agustin Poet Haiku

Blue Jays

distinct calling styles
marked blue jays’ God-endowed sounds…
forest grand chorale*

*Psalm 104:12 By them shall the fowls of the heaven have their habitation, which sing among the branches. 

January 18, 2021
3rd place, "A Cardinal, Blue Jay, or Chickadee Haiku" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 1/22/2021.

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Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2021 at 2:00 PM awesome final line on this one! Congrats on the win

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2021 at 3:40 AM Just imagine how the grand choir of heaven will sound. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Jan Allison January 23, 2021 at 12:50 PM with many congrats on your winning poem Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2021 at 11:38 AM - Congratulations on your winning haiku, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan January 23, 2021 at 2:18 AM Well written and congratulations. Beata.

Eve Roper January 22, 2021 at 7:28 PM Beata, I was a pleased to read your Haiku with great imagery and flow . Congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve

Linda Alice Fowler January 22, 2021 at 5:28 PM Congratulations on the win Beata! Linda

Brian Sambourne January 22, 2021 at 4:47 PM Lovely, Beata. Blue Jays indeed can be a chorus; a truly colorful group of tenacious birds. Best wishes, Brian

Tania Kitchin January 22, 2021 at 4:05 PM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, love the imagery!

Sam Kauffman January 18, 2021 at 5:10 PM So charming Beata! Wonderful to see a tip of the hat to the noisy, but beautiful, blue jay! Best wishes and blessings for the contest.