Blue Jay

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Blue Jay Adult

blue jay spark wonder opens its mouth let song out~ talk through dreary sky

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/8/2022 7:18:00 AM

Fine example of a haiku.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/6/2022 10:32:00 PM

Eve, hi. I find this a true, delightful write. I also like the art. I had over the years been a backyard, serious birdwatcher.Bluejays get a bad rap. But, I grew to love them. Here, I found cardinals to be more aggressive & pick fights. Part of it, I think, is that jays are bigger & also very fast. I love to watch them grab & fly off with peanuts. Thanks 4 this. Applause! xox. sally