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Blue Jay

a lonely blue jay
whispering loud in low branch
melody of love


Second Place in Haiku - Blue Jay Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 11:25 AM

They do whisper their love songs loudly! Great ku Jenish, congratulations for your win. xomo

Jenish Somadas

May 15, 2020 at 12:02 PM

Thank you for your delightful comment Pigeon..

Reason A. Poteet

May 15, 2020 at 11:25 AM

congratulations, Jenish. Missing his mate surely. I understand blue jays mate for life. I can hear his whisper, "I'm over here."

Jenish Somadas

May 15, 2020 at 12:03 PM

I never heard in real..Thank you Reason..

MD Johnson

May 15, 2020 at 6:51 AM

Congratulations! Enjoyed —MDJ

Jenish Somadas

May 15, 2020 at 8:42 AM

Thank you Johnson...

Mohan Chutani

May 15, 2020 at 4:38 AM

Melodious blue Jay win. Congrats

Jenish Somadas

May 15, 2020 at 4:42 AM

Thank you Mohan..

Jan Allison

May 14, 2020 at 5:42 PM

oh such a sweet poem Jenish!Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas

May 14, 2020 at 11:46 PM

Thank you Jan..

Tania Kitchin

May 14, 2020 at 3:58 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Jenish Somadas

May 14, 2020 at 11:45 PM

Thank you Tania for the wonderful contest and my placement..

John Watt

May 14, 2020 at 12:22 PM

Nice to see your creative haiku of the lonely jay receive a win today, Jenish. Take care, my friend. Best wishes, John

Jenish Somadas

May 14, 2020 at 12:36 PM

Thank you John for your kind support..Stay safe..

Aditi Mishra

May 14, 2020 at 12:00 PM

The loud whispers of the lonely blue jay have been echoed. Congratulations on your win Jenish! :)

Jenish Somadas

May 14, 2020 at 12:36 PM

Your comments are like a poem read..Thanks Aditi..

Michelle Faulkner

May 13, 2020 at 4:17 PM

I hope your blue jay's melody of love works - creative entry for the contest...

Jenish Somadas

May 15, 2020 at 12:05 PM

Thank you..

Michelle Faulkner

May 14, 2020 at 11:32 AM

Well now you have happy news, congrats on your win!

Jenish Somadas

May 13, 2020 at 10:57 PM

Thank you Michelle..So many wonderful blue jays flying around including yours..Mine is lonely and sad..

Gershon Wolf

May 10, 2020 at 1:38 PM

Yes. A Superb melody! Resonates w'th me! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

May 11, 2020 at 9:53 AM

Thank you Gershon for your kind support..

Shirley Hawkins

May 10, 2020 at 2:39 AM

The lonely bird has positioned itself so he can be more easily seen by a potential partner to be the love of his life so he won't be lonely anymore, how lovely is that ... no different from us. Keep well and safe ....Shirley

Jenish Somadas

May 11, 2020 at 9:53 AM

Yes.. Lonely birds will mostly sing.. Thank you..Takecare..

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