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Blue Jay

a lonely blue jay
whispering loud in low branch
melody of love


Second Place in Haiku - Blue Jay Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/15/2020 11:25:00 AM

congratulations, Jenish. Missing his mate surely. I understand blue jays mate for life. I can hear his whisper, "I'm over here."

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 12:03:00 PM

I never heard in real..Thank you Reason..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/15/2020 11:25:00 AM

They do whisper their love songs loudly! Great ku Jenish, congratulations for your win. xomo

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful comment Pigeon..

MD Johnson

Date: 5/15/2020 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations! Enjoyed —MDJ

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thank you Johnson...

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/15/2020 4:38:00 AM

Melodious blue Jay win. Congrats

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Mohan..

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2020 5:42:00 PM

oh such a sweet poem Jenish!Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:46:00 PM

Thank you Jan..

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2020 3:58:00 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:45:00 PM

Thank you Tania for the wonderful contest and my placement..

John Watt

Date: 5/14/2020 12:22:00 PM

Nice to see your creative haiku of the lonely jay receive a win today, Jenish. Take care, my friend. Best wishes, John

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 12:36:00 PM

Thank you John for your kind support..Stay safe..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 12:00:00 PM

The loud whispers of the lonely blue jay have been echoed. Congratulations on your win Jenish! :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 12:36:00 PM

Your comments are like a poem read..Thanks Aditi..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/13/2020 4:17:00 PM

I hope your blue jay's melody of love works - creative entry for the contest...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 12:05:00 PM

Thank you..

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/14/2020 11:32:00 AM

Well now you have happy news, congrats on your win!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:57:00 PM

Thank you Michelle..So many wonderful blue jays flying around including yours..Mine is lonely and sad..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2020 1:38:00 PM

Yes. A Superb melody! Resonates w'th me! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/11/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Gershon for your kind support..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/10/2020 2:39:00 AM

The lonely bird has positioned itself so he can be more easily seen by a potential partner to be the love of his life so he won't be lonely anymore, how lovely is that ... no different from us. Keep well and safe ....Shirley

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/11/2020 9:53:00 AM

Yes.. Lonely birds will mostly sing.. Thank you..Takecare..

Blue Jay

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