Blue Jay

beautiful blue jay
singing from frosty branches ~
winters melody

birdnaturehaiku

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JCB Brul

Date: 4/11/2022 10:53:00 PM

You created a great example of what a haiku should be! I love the last line most..."winter melodies".

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/12/2022 3:59:00 AM

Thank you!

JCB Brul

Date: 4/11/2022 10:53:00 PM

You created a great example of what a haiku should be! I love the last line most..."winter melodies".

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/11/2022 1:17:00 PM

Love it! Awesome haiku. God bless you, Love, Gina

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/12/2022 3:59:00 AM

Thank you!

Constance La France

Date: 1/17/2021 11:06:00 AM

Tania, this is a lovely haiku and great example for your contest, hope I can write you a beauty _Constance

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/17/2021 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Constance, I am sure you will write a great one!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/11/2020 12:20:00 PM

They are very striking Tania. A lovely example of what you require for your contest. xxoo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2020 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Connie

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/10/2020 6:33:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this haiku, exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/10/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you and you're welcome Beata!