Blue In Centerstage

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*Image of Blues by Google.com. Blue In Centerstage Fondly, instants our measure of blue ... a boost or flat bring on, Promptly, sea and sky are limelight ... point of view as quite concise, Nonchalantly, unconcern and clamminess ... ranks are withdrawn, *Fait accompli, preceding segments ... sway tactfully suffice. Begets the 'ins' ... inspiration, intuition, intellect, Pirouettes credence, responsibility ... and confidence, Plaquettes of ... honorable awards, stellar ribbons select, Assets of the unique bluish shades ... influence prominence. Truly in hints of unswerving order ... peace, calm, and patience, Cerulean surge deep relations ... o'er those superfluous, Julian age casts peasant clothes ... purple made nobles complacence, Herculean genders preferred hue ... business partners a plus. Introspective chroma ... symbolize wisdom and conviction, Defective draw sadness ... abysses of the human psyche, Infective features ... induce fears, threats, and constant affliction, Effective tint ... guides profound acumens by the almighty. Cobalt animate ... ingenuity and enlightenment, Pole vault reputations ... paint artisans treasured qualities, Assault on nervous manner ... random acts disentitlement, Exalt betterment ... magnify productive monopolies. Cyan et al., ... are appetite and sleeplessness suppressants, Point man merges the bluewashed value ... constant and unchanging, Yes-man splashes ... versatile befits locations quintessence, Wiseman choose ... blue on blue light-heartedness ever exchanging. *Fait accompli: a thing accomplished 2021 November 04 *2nd Place* BLUE ~~Mystic Rose Rose: Judged 2021 November 06

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2021 3:53:00 PM

What a creative piece this is, William. And I see you placed high. Way to go!! And thanks so much for my placement with Zapped.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/16/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thanks a whole lot, Andrea, you're a 'super' souper, and truly the pleasure was all mines to give my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/8/2021 1:40:00 PM

Amazingly crafted my aloha friend. Love the front end rhymes and the creative formatting with so many exceptional "blue" images to tease the senses - "herculean" writing! Congratulations. Sending you blessings painted in splashes of aloha blue! Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/8/2021 3:42:00 PM

Sam, these past two weeks, waning autumn gifts Hawaiian eyes an ambitious cloudless sky, and afar horizon a relentless mounting surge, each claiming supremacy of blue. Your blessings have been well received my friend, Aloha!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/7/2021 11:46:00 AM

Wow! CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece, William! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/7/2021 12:58:00 PM

Janice, I was a bit remiss after entering for it seemed fragmented, despite it all, I am glad for your kindness my friend, Aloha!