Blue Hours of My Loveliness

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When I'm deepest green beneath clear blue skies and seas cascades of flowers! Then bliss hours of my beauty and my radiant good health. In blue hours of green birds sing and there's abundance planetary dream I hope soon days are coming when you listen to your heart.

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/1/2023 3:47:00 PM

So lovely, Evelyn. Thank you for sharing it. Take care, Shirley

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2023 4:29:00 PM

You are quite welcome, Shirley. Many thanks for your appreciation. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2023 12:33:00 PM

this is very sweet. You really like the cool colors of nature!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2023 3:03:00 PM

I do, Andrea, and green is one of my favorites! Thank you for your thoughts. :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/31/2023 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful writing. Was there the intentional double meaning in the last lines? "I hope soon days are coming when you listen to your heart." -- I read this two ways: hoping you will open your heart to the beautiful nature around you, and also, open your eyes and heart to the green of my heart beckoning you. Anyway, it is great!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/31/2023 3:27:00 PM

I would say that your latter interpretation is closer to my meaning, although I do feel that appreciation for nature enriches one's life, and this love of nature leads to having the right attitude about climate control and sustainability. Climate control, sustainability and green practices are the main focus of this poem. Thank you very much for the complimentary response. :)