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Blue Hours of My Loveliness

When I'm deepest green
beneath clear blue skies and seas
cascades of flowers!
Then bliss hours of my beauty
and my radiant good health.

In blue hours of green
birds sing and there's abundance
planetary dream
I hope soon days are coming
when you listen to your heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hawkins Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:47 PM
So lovely, Evelyn. Thank you for sharing it. Take care, Shirley
Buehler Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 4:29 PM
You are quite welcome, Shirley. Many thanks for your appreciation. :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 12:33 PM
this is very sweet. You really like the cool colors of nature!
Buehler Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM
I do, Andrea, and green is one of my favorites! Thank you for your thoughts. :)
DiMino Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Beautiful writing. Was there the intentional double meaning in the last lines? "I hope soon days are coming when you listen to your heart." -- I read this two ways: hoping you will open your heart to the beautiful nature around you, and also, open your eyes and heart to the green of my heart beckoning you. Anyway, it is great!
Buehler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 3:27 PM
I would say that your latter interpretation is closer to my meaning, although I do feel that appreciation for nature enriches one's life, and this love of nature leads to having the right attitude about climate control and sustainability. Climate control, sustainability and green practices are the main focus of this poem. Thank you very much for the complimentary response. :)
Poet Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Your pair of tanka is just stunning, Evelyn. The warmth and freshness of spring are conveyed via your color palette.
Buehler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Spring is a wonderful time to be thinking of how much we love our planet. Thank you very much for your kind remarks.
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Bright imagery, Evelyn:)
Buehler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Thank you for the happy thoughts, Jo. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Your poems, except the Saturday ones, are always short and deliciously sweet.
Buehler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 10:04 AM
It wonderful to know you enjoy my poems. Thank you for the compliment, my friend. :)
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