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Blue Haze

Deep in heat, a slice of shade Runs from stern sun; damp bare glade Cools too few, too thin the dew One more lost door, blue haze fade... 3/14/20

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/31/2020 6:37:00 PM

Such beautiful intrigue, Michelle.. steamy, luscious imagery and one more lost door.. ah, the magical mystery of it! A gorgeous piece so full of fantastic poetry in four lines that it feels so much bigger! Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/31/2020 6:57:00 PM

You have such a generous heart, Susan, a thousand thanks!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/16/2020 8:33:00 PM

Oh beautifully penned. Good luck in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2020 9:04:00 PM

Appreciate your visit and comment, thank you-

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/15/2020 12:41:00 PM

You ink many beautiful writes my friend, this one is no exception best of luck in the contest. Blessings Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/15/2020 4:30:00 PM

Blessings to you also, Jennifer, you are so encouraging!

John Watt

Date: 3/15/2020 2:01:00 AM

Michelle, I haven't tried this form. How hard it seems to be limited only to one-syllable words! You did it well, though. Nice to have a little heat from the sun in the middle of cold winter!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/15/2020 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, John - I recently had the thought 'slice of shade' when I saw one thin tree branch with a tiny bit of shade, so the poem grew from there