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Blue Green Flames

Blue green flames rose from his palms He formed them into a ball Tossed it into outer space In a distance it looked small He breathed upon it's surface Giving land and oceans form He opened up the heavens Creating lakes with a storm Life sprang within the waters Both in the lakes and the Sea Animals walking on the land A glimpse of eternity Created in his image The first human came to life God knew he would be lonely So for him he made a wife Placed in a special garden Where all of their needs are met Still man was not satisfied There was more for him to get Ejected from the Garden A flamed sword placed at the gate Communion with their Father Delayed till a future date

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Richard D Seal

Date: 9/29/2013 5:23:00 PM

Hahaha Great ending Rick, I love these Adam and Eve stories. Wonderful take on Genesis, those passages still fascinate me. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/22/2013 6:58:00 AM

Good morning....I came here waiting for a new poem....Still waiting! ;) Thanks for your comment on my poem. I have just now posted a new one. I will respond to your comment in a moment....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 7:35:00 AM

Good morning, I now have one posted as well.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/22/2013 5:59:00 AM

A fantastic poem full of hope

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Monterey.

Red Fiery

Date: 9/21/2013 5:20:00 PM

Once again a great write Richard ! You have done a marvellous job..:) And yes I agree with what Eileen said..cheers !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Red, enjoyed your poems this morning.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/21/2013 1:42:00 PM

Richard...it's almost like you saw it all in a vision...Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful...The story of Beginnings...we have yet to experience the climactic final events after which Eden will be restored...Won't that be amazing. :) Thanks for the visits. If this is for a contest...My money is on you.... :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 1:45:00 PM

The inspiration came from a contest about magic. People think about magic as makebelieve so for that reason I will not enter this one into the contest.