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As I stood in my flower garden, a gang of blue butterflies came drifting; they kissed a tall purple corn flower, then, stopped to caress my painted daisies. Fluttering and twirling in a waltzing dance, between my yarrow, sage and yellow thing growing; they stopped for a quick sip of fountain water, then, the assemblage of blue gems floated away. _______________________ March 27, 2019

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Date: 3/28/2019 7:33:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful image with well penned. Enjoyed reading it
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Date: 3/28/2019 4:57:00 AM
Love this, this is a gorgeous poem with beautiful imagery! I find it very soothing to me and a fav!
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Date: 3/28/2019 1:53:00 AM
This is dainty, and exquisite, Constance. Beautifully done.
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Date: 3/28/2019 12:47:00 AM
You describe the butterflies and flowers as if you are sitting write next to them - your fertile imagination fills this poem with serene beauty. Thank-you for my win in your contest Dear Heart. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/27/2019 12:46:00 PM
to be a butterfly, not a bad life, well documented by your poem. Noel from NoelsArt
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Date: 3/27/2019 12:05:00 PM
Oh so beautiful! A lovely Spring bouquet of “flutter bys”
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:58:00 AM
Wish I had your talents with imagery. Fantastic artistry with words. Panagiota
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:02:00 AM
What a beautiful image!!!
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Date: 3/27/2019 9:44:00 AM
Dear Heart, great imagery and movement, a very good write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/27/2019 9:38:00 AM
A beautiful poem to read today :)
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