Paul Murray Poet Free verse

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Blue Face Betty

It’s been so  n i c e  - to hear you now
It’s been awhile
Feeling like a  l o s e r   n o w
Over my heart I  f a l l 
Like a sucker punch
It hurts so   s  w  e  l  l

T e l l   m e 
T a l k  to  m e 
Tell me how you really feel -  about  m e
T a l k  to  m e
Come on - talk to me 
Blue face Betty 

It’s been months 
It’s been dizzying 
Life without you
Seems like the worlds empty 
With empty  w o r d s 
Without any empathy
It’s cold in my heart

T e l l   m e 
T a l k  to m e 
Tell me how you really feel -  about  m e
T a l k  to  m e
Come on - talk to me 
Blue face Betty 

Hit on me 
Turn your lips on me
Take me out with a tease 
Come on Betty 
Come on Betty
Come on Betty
Come on Betty
Come on Betty
T a l k  to  m e

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Ink Empress December 27, 2023 at 5:27 AM You’ve expressed so sincerely the emptiness one feels in their beloveds absence. The longing and emotions in this hits strong. Pleasure always reading your work Paul Murray December 27, 2023 at 1:20 PM Thank you for reading my raw scratchy write.