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Written on October 13, 2024

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blue eyes

Katauta Poem

twinkling, burning glow
blowing away each shadow
in your eyes, soft sighs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hawley Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Wow, that is a crystal clear picture you have painted! I have blue eyes, my oldest daughter and her husband both do, as do the little grand daughter they gave me.
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October 13, 2024 at 11:40 AM
Cute haiku. I will never forget my uncle's blue eyes.
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